Showing posts with label lyrics. Show all posts
Showing posts with label lyrics. Show all posts

Monday, 9 April 2018

TVXQ / DBSK - Closer lyrics translation!

This is the English translation for Closer, Changmin's solo, track 6 on New Chapter #1 - A Chance of Love.

OMG

NO ONE TOLD ME CHANGMIN HAD A /SMUT/ SONG!!!!!!

I can't breathe, the man is killing me.  @_@

Easy things are boring
I know that too
So I desire you more
I can’t hide it
A little hair-raising, you and I
Just somehow attracted without reason

If I go one step more
You again 2 steps back
Don’t be tense
It only arouses me (roughened breathing)
Roughened breathing
Roughened breathing

White things, somehow
Do you know the kind of heart that wants more to dye them?
Hidden expressions in your innocent face,
I become curious oh

If I go one step more
You again 2 steps back
Don’t be tense
It only arouses me (roughened breathing)
Roughened breathing
Roughened breathing

The more I see you, the less I can bear it
Oh oh oh oh
Tonight entrust yourself to me
Hidden imaginations awaken in this moment

Sometimes I’m not sure if I can reach you
You’re tantalizing, and
Sometimes snugly
I hold you in my arms

The moment our breath touches
You and I become one
Oh
  
If I go one step more
You again 2 steps back
Don’t be tense
It only arouses me (roughened breathing)
Roughened breathing
Roughened breathing


Translator's Notes:

I'm gonna be straight with you, I got distracted going WHUT?! WHAT IS THIS SONG CHANGMIN?!? and forgot what I was doing lol.

On the other hand, the whole thing made sense and was easy to translate, it just... translated into... THAT.

CHANGMIN OMG.

1.  "So I desire you more" - has no "you" in it as per usual, it just makes sense that she's what he desires.  (*cough* he makes that only too obvious later *cough*)

2. "A little hair-raising" - "아슬아슬하다" means "to be a close thing / risky / touch-and-go" etc, so I went with "hair-raising" as a version that could apply to a couple as well as a high-speed car chase or something.

3. "Attracted without reason" - the lyrics have here "이윤" (profit/gain), but I decided "이유 + 는" (reason) made more sense in the context?

4. "It only arouses me" - DED DED DED sorry but he really said that

5. "Sometimes I’m not sure if I can reach you / You’re tantalizing" - The Korean is a little hard to translate here, "닿을 " means something like "as if I will touch you as if I stop/won't", i.e. he's not sure he can, which fits with her being "애태우게 하다" (tantalizing / held in suspense) in the next line.

Saturday, 7 April 2018

TVXQ / DBSK - Puzzle Translated lyrics!

This is the English Translation of the lyrics to track 5 on New Chapter #1 - A Chance of Love, which is Yunho's song, Puzzle.

An incomplete puzzle
My refound pleasure
Into this previously emptied place
Filling with the pieces called ‘you’
My love it has to be you
If it’s not you, no one can complete me
Like I'm the first man you possessed
Now you hide inside of me
Try to anticipate the more time I’ll show for you
Beginning again movie (action)

You perfectly fill me Right now
Raise ne up higher Right now
Assemble me without empty spaces Right now (Right now)
Right now (Right now) Action

Oh through one puzzle piece (Action)
In the assembled picture (Section)
Towards you On and on (Action)
Oh through one puzzle piece (Action)
In the assembled picture (Section)
Everything Ready for (Action)

Round 2, round 2
This empty place you’ll fill for me, you know
You fit everywhere in the empty space as if it were like cogwheels
The moment I should lose you (yeah yeah yeah yeah)
Oh I am a picture that cannot be completed

Every moment, again falling I waited for this
Now you sneak inside of me (Now you sneak inside of me)
Make a sturdier house for the two of us
Now beginning movie (Action)

You perfectly fill me Right now
Raise me up higher Right now
Assemble me without empty spaces Right now (Right now)
Right now (Right now) Action

Oh through one puzzle piece (Action)
In the assembled picture (Section)
Towards you On and on (Action)
Oh through one puzzle piece (Action)
In the assembled picture (Section)
Everything Ready for (Action)

Ooh
As if surely being assembled, us Right now (Action)
Ooh
Dive in more deeply
Right now, right now
I just hope you’re ready for that (Action)

You perfectly fill me Right now
Raise me up higher Right now
Assemble me without empty spaces Right now (Right now)
Right now (Right now) Action

Oh through one puzzle piece (Action)
In the assembled picture (Section)
Towards you On and on (Action)
Oh through one puzzle piece (Action)
In the assembled picture (Section)
Everything Ready for (Action)

With this puzzle called ‘you’
I’ve finally become complete
You’re my last.


Translator's Notes:

Another reasonably straightforward one to translate.  ^_^   It helps that the "She's puzzle pieces filling me up to make a complete picture" metaphor remains consistent, it really helps with translation!

1.  "Like I'm the first man you possessed / Now you hide inside of me" - This was the hardest line for me, it's really confusingly ordered.  Anyway, that's my best guess.  The verbs are "홀리다" (to be possessed, bewitched by etc) and "숨다" (to hide), but I guess it makes sense if she's puzzle pieces filling him, by extension she is getting inside him so-to-speak, like a (demonic) possession...

2. "Raise me up higher" - there's no "me" in this line (although this song is pretty good with pronouns in general!) so who knows what is actually being raised up higher.

3. "You fit everywhere in the empty space as if it were like cogwheels" - That sounds weird but it's pretty much literally what it says.  There were a lot of "like" and "as if" type words in that sentence - more than the English can really handle.  Basically, cogwheels fit together real nice with no gaps, and so do these pieces filling the space?

Thursday, 5 April 2018

TVXQ / DBSK - Only for You translated lyrics!

English translation of Only for You lyrics - track 4 on New Chapter #1 - A Chance of Love.

Choose my best clothes and
Spray on newly bought cologne and
With time to spare
Set out with a good mood
The fact is, I’ll arrive some time later
In a running car
In the flowing music,
Even my heart is in tune, dancing
Now where are you?
Slowly preparing
Certainly I’ll meet at your side
(Baby, baby I’ll go)

Baby baby, in every lovely day
Filling with thrills, thrills, Only for you
Each thing we do together, each place we go together
Baby baby, baby baby, it’s only for you

In your heart, erase everything except me
If it’s just one time, like fate, just believe in me
See me, deeply, completely fallen in love
It seems I’ve found the answer I’ve searched for

The me by your side they envy Everybody (Everybody)
They can’t compare to you Nobody (Nobody)
You fill me with this feeling
Until my heart flutters All for you (That’s right)

In the spreading smile
In the wafted fragrance
My head becomes confused and
From today it’s severe
Why are you so pretty?
Because of you, I'm breathless
(Baby baby, I’ll go)

Baby baby, in every lovely day
Filling with thrills, thrills, Only for you
Each thing we do together, each place we go together
Baby baby, baby baby, it’s only for you

I will do better I’m in love
From one to ten
So my everything is, in your eyes, heart
Likeable oh

Uh sweetly, ordinarily begun love
Let’s go now (Baby baby I’ll go)

Baby baby, in every lovely day
Filling with thrills, thrills, Only for you
Each thing we do together, each place we go together
Baby baby, baby baby, it’s only for you

Baby baby, in every lovely day
Filling with thrills, thrills, Only for you
Each thing we do together, each place we go together
Baby baby, baby baby, it’s only for you


 Translator's Notes:

I like this song, it was pretty easy to translate.  ^__^

1. There were, however, a lot of the ol' missing pronouns.  So the whole first bit, for instance, with him getting ready, there's not a single sign it's him not her.  The references to who does what are basically restricted to "I'll arrive sometime later" and "Where are you?" and I tried to fit it in around that, so I translated "향수" as "cologne" and not "perfume" etc.

2. "In every lovely day / filling with thrills" - "설렘" means thrill/flutter/tingle/tremble etc and is a good one for describing how you feel when you're in love.

3. "See me, deeply, completely fallen in love" - it's hard to express how very badly he's fallen here lol, because there is a veritable pile-up of words in the Korean.  "사랑에 푹 빠져버린 날 봐" means literally "in love deep/well sunk-completely me see".

4. "My head becomes confused" contains an idiomatic expression with the verb "아득하다" which literally means "to be distant" but in this context can mean you're feeling at a loss/dazed and confused etc.

Wednesday, 4 April 2018

TVXQ / DBSK - Broken translated lyrics!

English lyrics translation of Broken, track 3 on New Chapter #1 - A Chance of Love.

This song has a bit of a different vibe to the first two tracks, as you can see from the lyrics.

Uh oh oh oh
Uh oh oh oh
While smiling like any other time, like we’ll see each other again
Sending each other away and
Like it was something mature
On the outside, I patiently endure you

All the familiar things
As they become strange
I will waver a little, but…

It will all pass away, just to the extent I will surely endure it
Frequent showers that wet me and stop
Under them, You and me

It will all pass away, just to the extent it will be surely forgotten
Now perfectly the words of parting
Match You and me
We were broken

We were broken (We were broken)
We were broken
It will be forgotten, right?

Even the act of trying to change for each other
Only, it just got us to that point
And the things we utterly could not understand
Before the coming farewell, they’re nothing

Only left as regret
The past figures
Some day becoming dull

It will all pass away, just to the extent I will surely endure it
Left in my memories
The image in time
Within it You and I

It will all pass away, just to the extent it will surely be forgotten
As if it’s natural
Going to find that natural place You and me
We were broken

We were broken
We were broken
(To the extent I calmly send you away)

We were broken
We were broken
We’ll drift apart, right?

It will all pass away, just to the extent I will surely endure it
Frequent showers that wet me and stop
Under them, You and me

It will all pass away, just to the extent it will be surely forgotten
Now perfectly the words of parting
Match You and me
We were broken

It will all pass away, just to the extent I will surely endure it
Left in my memories
The image in time
Within it You and I

It will all pass away, just to the extent it will surely be forgotten
As if it’s natural
Going to find that natural place You and me
We were broken


Translator's Notes:

1. The Korean title, 다 지나간다, does not mean "broken" (that comes from the English in the lyrics I guess) but "It's all passing and going" or, in better English something like "It's all gone".

2.  "Just to the extent" is something that gets repeated kinda a lot and that's annoying because it's hard to express well in English.  It comes from "만큼", which means variously "as much as", "to the extent that" etc.

3. "Now perfectly the words of parting / Match" - this verb (어울리다) is often used for clothes, like if they match or to say if something suits a person.  It can also be used of people as in for people to "mix" or indeed be well suited as a couple etc.  So!  It could be that the words of parting "match" (each other, if they've both reached the point of wanting to say them) or they "suit" or whatever because now is the right time for them?

4. "Going to find that natural place" - I think the "natural place" here means going back to where they began / where they're comfortable (in other words, back to being apart and their separate lives).

Monday, 2 April 2018

TVXQ / DBSK - A Chance of Love (운명) translated lyrics!

Track two on New Chapter #1 is the title track, A Chance of Love 운명.

Note that the Korean title,운명, in fact means "fate / destiny".

Here's my English translation of the lyrics:

Woo woo
Woo woo
Ay ay Artificial things are very boring
Ay The time when a passing gaze meets
So the dialogue of the eyes was begun
Drawn to me, as if pushed over here

In an unrealistic situation

I am as though falling into a trance

You, without obstacle, without hindrance shaking me

All of my body’s cells scream, “It’s you”
You ornament one page of a pre-scheduled history
How in words can I define this communion?
It’s alright, it’s ok
It’s definitely that thing they call fate oh yeah yeah
Woo oh yeah yeah

Woo 
It’s definitely that thing they call fate oh yeah yeah

Woo it's alright it's ok
We’re that thing they call fate

Ay ay At the edge of being bored, I’m really sick of it
Ay Setting aside the attention of those women
I thought it wouldn’t happen to me
But you arrest me
My own way only one way
You yourself come and you fall
I’ll show you, eyes seeing a different visual world

All of my body’s cells scream, “It’s you”
You ornament one page of a pre-scheduled history
How in words can I define this communion?
It’s alright, it’s ok
It’s definitely that thing they call fate oh yeah yeah
Woo oh yeah yeah
Woo
It’s definitely that thing they call fate oh yeah yeah
Woo it's alright it's ok
We’re that thing they call fate

Now casting a spell, through whispered words
Unable to see anything except me, your eyes, eyes
Like fate, the fact you’ll completely fall for me
At my side, the fact is you’ll become the best
We'll keep it together we'll fall in magic
Every single day
This unique feeling renewing each day
We will keep it together we pray that
We own each other up all night
As I lead, you follow for me

All of my body’s cells scream, “It’s you”
You ornament one page of a pre-scheduled history
How in words can I define this communion?
It’s alright, it’s ok
It’s definitely that thing they call fate oh yeah yeah
Woo oh yeah yeah
Woo
It’s definitely that thing they call fate oh yeah yeah
Woo it's alright it's ok
We’re that thing they call fate

Translator's Notes:

This one was WAY harder than Love Line in places.  >.>

1. "It's definitely that thing they call fate" - this is rather a lengthy translation of the line, but I'm trying to be literal.  Most translations have it as "that's fate" which is basically the same thing and fits the line better?  However, the Korean line, "바로 운명이란 ", means "directly that said-is-fate-thing".

2. "You yourself come and you fall" - how you translate this depends on the spacing of the Korean, because " 스스로와 빠져" and " 스스로 와 빠져" could basically mean different things.  With "" attached to "스스로" it means more like, "with you yourself" (a construction you might use elsewhere, say, when saying you were talking just with yourself).  Attach "" to "빠져" and it no longer means "with" at all, it's a verb, and you get instead, "come and fall".
Did I ever say Korean was complicated??  ^_^;;;
But basically either makes sense in context, I guess.  She's falling, they're falling together...

3. The next line, "I'll show you, eyes seeing a different visual the world" is just one of those fractured-Korean-in-song-lyrics things that I give up on trying to make real sense out of, and makes me wonder why I'm not translating something with proper sentences in it, lol.  Is it 2 fragments?  3?  Does it make sense either way?  Who even knows.

4. "As I lead, you follow for me" - I stuck that "for" in there although "As I lead, you follow" sounds better in English, simply because the Korean line, "이끄는 대로 따라와 ", means "as soon as leading, you follow-and-come-for-my-benefit me".  That's just one of those wonderful Korean constructions that can't be properly translated into English, but I wanted to get some of it's meaning across.

Sunday, 1 April 2018

Yunho - DROP MV beginning rap part translation!

The lyrics I found for DROP (my translation here) did not include the rap at the start of the MV, and that's like the entire first minute!  So it would not do.

(And quite seriously you cannot watch DROP enough times, it's EPIC.  *__*)

So, I scoured the internet for a transcription of the rap, and here is my translation so you guys can enjoy it too.

A new nation has begun
This is King's Speech

The gloomy future,the future that did not come back to me
The belief that I can change it, is that appropriate?

I need to know, this future masked by despair
That it's as dangerous as a military service is clear

This whirlpool-like reality facing me, from that time already
I saw I'd finished preparations to deal with it a long time ago

It isn't fair.  Going nowhere.
The courage to face fear started from here

Only imitators of the unusual, unable to read common sense, remain
At that time it was wrong, and now it is just normal

It isn't fair.  Going nowhere.
The courage to face fear started from here.


Translator's notes:

I was in kind of a hurry to translate when I did it and now I've lost the Korean version so I can't check my translation before posting.  T_T

Anyway, I still think this is important if you want to understand the whole lyrics.  It's a song about political disillusionment and the desire for change.

TVXQ / DBSK - Love Line (평행선) Translated lyrics!

TVXQ are back!!!

Thank you world for the miracle that is Yunho and Changmin!   m(_ _)m

Because they are my ONE TRUE LOVE I will of course be translating all the songs off the album, but let me begin with the English translation of track one, Love Line.

When I think about you
I think about how
All day long, even though I try agonising over it
I don’t know you well
This not knowing if I know
You are a very special thing
In each day, many times
You again put me to the test

Woo woohoo We’re very different, but
Why am I attracted like this?
Woo woohoo Even though I understand with my head
I cannot explain it with words

You and I, parallel lines
We walk then separately
At the end of the road, we’ll find a road to walk together
Now, you and I
We’re a little clumsy, but
You gradually come a little closer to me
I gradually go a little closer to you

Dozens of times in one day
Every day you ask
Where on earth, how
Can we check that it is good

Dozens of times in a day
I answer it
What on earth in this liking heart
Needs a reason?

Woo woohoo Even though we’re very similar
I don’t know why we differ that way
Woo woohoo However much I think about it
It’s something I cannot understand

You and I, parallel lines
We walk then separately
At the end of the road, we’ll find a road to walk together
Now, you and I
We’re a little clumsy, but
You gradually come a little closer to me

The endless parallel lines
Gazing into the far distance
At the edge of sight, the moment our eyes meet
That way, you and I
We’re a little slow, but
You gradually come a little closer to me
I gradually go a little closer to you

You and I, although we’re very similar
I don’t know why we don’t know each other this way
You and I, even though we’re very different
Why are we attracted to each other this way?

You and I, parallel lines
We walk then separately
At the end of the road, we’ll find a road to walk together
Now, you and I
We’re a little clumsy, but
You gradually come a little closer to me

The endless parallel lines
Gazing into the far distance
At the edge of sight, the moment our eyes meet
That way, you and I
We’re a little slow, but
You gradually come a little closer to me
I gradually go a little closer to you

Woo hoo hoo

Translator's notes:

This song was pretty ok to translate, actually.  And it's awesome to sing along to as well, not that I got distracted at all while I was translating... ^_^;

But 평행선 from the title actually means "parallel line(s)", so the whole "love line" thing is a metaphorical thing and it's not literally a song about, idk, palmistry and the "love line" in your hand or whatever.

Always happy to answer questions about my translations though, if you have them! (^_^ )/

Monday, 12 February 2018

Roy Kim - Only Then (그때 헤어지면 돼) translated lyrics!

Roy Kim has a new single!!!!

^_____^

I love this song.  I love all of Roy Kim's songs tbh, but it's been a while since we had a new one, and this is just so.... Roy Kim.  It's a lovely, soft, sad-yet-hopeful ballad that just makes my heart go all melty.  *_*

Here's the English translation of the lyrics:


The way to love me is not difficult
Just in the shape I am now, please hold me close
I don’t know how it will become between us
Because it is undecided, I like it

What people say, what importance does it have?
That we’ll die without each other, what are you worrying about
Even if we love together more, it’s ok

If you come to like another person
If I become accustomed to being without you
If that time comes, if it becomes that time
Then if we break up, it’s ok.

The way to love you is also not difficult
If you give a smile one more time, take care just a little more
Our way of loving is not difficult either
If each day, from the first meeting glance
We gaze at each other

What people say, what importance does it have?
That we’ll die without each other, what are you worrying about
Even if we love together more, it’s ok

If you come to like another person
If I become accustomed to being without you
If that time comes, if it becomes that time
That time, that time, that time

When you no longer care if I catch you
And I, all the more exhausted, can no longer walk
If that time comes, if it becomes that time
Then if we break up, it’s ok
Then, if we break up, it’s ok



Translator's Notes:

그때 헤어지면  in the title translates as "Then if we break up, it's ok".


Actually this song was generally straightforward to translate... though the bits with "the way to love you" did not come with pronouns in the following line, so I had to take a stab in the dark whether it was "if I smile" or "if you smile" etc.

There was also one line that just confused me, which I think word-for-word means something like "you desire it or stop (desiring it), the fact that I will catch you".  Sooo I translated it as "When you no longer care if I catch you", probably wrongly lol but it was the only way I could think of to word it so it would fit in with the next lines which I do understand.

I've seen it elsewhere as something like "I'll catch you whether you want it or not" but that didn't seem to fit the pattern (which I take to be mirrored from "If you come to like someone else / If I become accustomed to being without you" - where both lines add up to the break up).  I was trying to find a way it was something spelling the end of the relationship too because in context that seemed to make sense.
Also in the MV it's the bit where Roy is running and he stops exhausted and gives this kind of little "ok, it's over" nod, and that seemed to fit too.

And did I mention that I love Roy Kim?  ^_~

Friday, 29 September 2017

Changmin - 여정 (In a Different Life) translated lyrics!

It's the return of my ultimate bias, Shim Changmin.  ^__^

And where Yunho is doing the "return of the king" thing with DROP, Changmin's solo is all about the fans.

Awww.  <3

First off! The Korean title 여정 means "Journey" which makes sense when you read the lyrics (as does "In a Different Life" as the English title. How often do they BOTH make sense?!).

From a very long time ago, how far have I come?
Will I be able to reach you?
Following this crooked, unappealing path
Inside the dust-covered diary there are many memories
The little miracles leading towards you

In a different life
Hearing, carried on the wind
In a different life
Your voice
In a different life

However much further must I wander?
Can you also come to me?
Following the watch's tick-tock sound
Each of my days, only slowly flowing away
The spreading, beautiful days facing you

In a different life
My world and yours
In a different life
The day they meet
In a different life

The song that calls me
Even if I am far away, I can feel it
With you

In a different life
My world and yours
In a different life
The day they meet
In a different life

In a different life
Hearing carried on the wind
In a different life
Your voice
In a different life


Translator's Notes:

In a different life / 너와 나의 세상이/ In a different life / 만나는 그날 : the word 너와 means either "you and" or "with you", so the meaning could equally be "My world with you" or "Your world and mine"... given in the other part the two Korean sentences joined (Hearing carried on the wind / your voice) I went with option two so 만나는 그날 (literally something like "that day of meeting") had something to tie to.

But yeah, actually this wasn't too hard (DROP poses far more translation problems, hence why I had no time for the notes!) and I'm glad Changmin loves us too.  <3

Monday, 25 September 2017

U-Know Yunho - DROP translated lyrics!

Still not fully recovered from having Yunho and Changmin back from the military this summer.

OMG I LOVE THEM

SO MUCH

So!  Obviously the first thing I do when I see the full MV for DROP (AWESOME btw, make sure you've seen it!) is seek out the lyrics and make an English translation.

And here it is:

Drop it low
The future is still veiled, still can't be seen, but
This passionate life-living era
This arid earth only inherited by this generation

In wickedness opening your eyes and closing your mouth
Courage thrown away for you is the result
Now as you see, as it was predicted
Now, on the fallen away bare ground
From the foundations, bit by bit we again-

I no longer find miracle
Written above the dust, a prophesy-like oracle
Even through just a small breath it will be destroyed
The already crumbling belief is shaking

The word "definition", the word I saw before in a textbook
The majority are dancing to the beat
When again, the completely thrown away
You that is truth, will you find me?

I can’t explain hard this feeling
While having lost gravity, a floating feeling
The barren future, if it is a legacy
Break it all, and begin

If you are dreaming of resurrection
If you see opportunities while wearing a mask of goodness No
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low

Eventually the previously stopped clock goes my way
Watch – another world pioneered by me
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low

Don't ignore it anymore, critical
That becomes a poisoning indulgence
The arid ground made by ignoring
In reality I can rest without shade

I won't, can't fight this feeling
The regret it had to be like that at that time
Open the doors closed before, like a flowing river
I go to seek my place

If you are dreaming of resurrection
If you see opportunities while wearing a mask of goodness No
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low

Eventually the previously stopped clock goes my way
Watch – another world pioneered by me
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low

It's a more painful reality, but
If you cross this mountain now
Sometime you will reach it
Even being joyful, the ocean of all things good

It started with candles
Emotion is not controllable, you don’t
Don't stop on the path going to the future
Don't enter on the rough road again
If you miss this opportunity
Now too hard to handle
Changing the future, now my first action
My attitude

 If you are dreaming of resurrection
If you see opportunities while wearing a mask of goodness No
(I see your attitude)
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low

Eventually the previously stopped clock goes my way
Watch – another world pioneered by me
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low
(Into the grave)

Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low
Now stop, drop it low
Please stop, drop it low
Now stop.

What I haven't done is rewatch the video with the lyrics and see if all of them are included.  Like, a lot of the song is rap, and that often gets missed out?  There was one bit at least (count down to the dance part near the end) I didn't think was here, but yeah.  It was just a countdown.

(UPDATE!  I have since found the rap part from the start of the MV and made a translation of that which I have posted separately, because that bit?  It's much more than just a countdown.  ^_~)

No time for translator's notes now, but anyone with questions I am more than happy to answer.  Just leave a comment!  ^__^

Tuesday, 30 May 2017

Roy Kim - Only If translated lyrics

Track 5 on Blooming Season EP. 


(FYI The Korean title of this song is "Sangsanghaebwatni" (상상해봤니) which does not mean "Only if" but something like, "Have you tried to imagine?")


This is one of my favourites on the album, it has a classic Roy Kim longing sound to it.  <3




Without thinking, when our two eyes met
Truthfully I was even a little scared
If I meet you
I fear I will not see anything else
If I can’t see you, I’m afraid it will hurt too much
You, so pretty, I cannot leave behind
I cannot just have you meet someone else

Have you tried to imagine it?
If we’d met when we were younger
Without any worries
We used to live following our hearts


Meeting someone
Besides each other’s feelings
There’s such a lot you must think of
The love you plan for and
The freedom I’d planned
They cannot come to flower in the same season


 So if by chance we brush by each other
With that long ago smile I will gaze at you


Have you tried to imagine it?
If we’d met when we were younger
Without any worries
We used to live following our hearts
Have you tried to imagine it? 
At that time
If we’d loved each other
I guess we wouldn’t be hurting like this now


Have you tried to imagine it? (x 6)




Translator's Notes:


It's another one with the confusion of you/me/us, given the context I translated mostly as "we" although it could just refer to him.  Otherwise it was fairly straightforward.  Roy Kim is much easier to translate than some others!!!  ^__^

Saturday, 27 May 2017

Roy Kim - Pretty You translated lyrics

Track 2 on Blooming Season EP... I knew this was going to be easy to translate when I was listening to it today.  ^__^ 


Even though I know
I cannot have you
Even though I know
In the end this is all my mistake
Since I cannot now let you go


Since you are pretty
Since you are pretty it is like that
Whoever I meet
They will be compared to you, and
Even the manner of speaking unknowingly resembles you
Even though everything was a dream
I can understand it


 Since you are pretty
Since you are pretty it is that way
Let’s both go far away
To a place where there is no one
Take my hand tightly and let’s go, let’s go
Where we can greatly breathe our love
To that place, to that place, to that place


Even if we are both just seeing each other
Even though my heart cannot keep you imprisoned
Even though time flows and passes, like that it will be ok


 Since you are pretty
Since you are pretty it is that way
Let’s both go far away
To a place where there is no one
Take my hand tightly and let’s go, let’s go
Where we can greatly breathe our love
To that place, to that place, to that place
Let’s go, let’s go, let’s go




Translator's Notes:


1. "Since I cannot let you go" is technically "put you down" like she's a heavy suitcase or something?  I couldn't think of another way to put that in English WITHOUT making her sound like a suitcase?  Idk if the putting-down-a-burden thing was what Roy was going for though, so...  ^_~ 


2.  "Where we can greatly breathe our love" really makes BASICALLY NO SENSE but hey, that's what it says, or "breathe it in/out deeply" or something else which ALSO MAKES NO SENSE but whatevs.


3.  "Even if time flows and passes": the two verbs are actually the same, so it is really "even if time flows and flows".  Time flows A LOT in Korean, not so much in English?  So I went with "flows and passes" - one translated literally, the other for meaning.


4.  A note about 그래:  This and it's ilk are literally THE BANE OF MY LIFE when translating (hmm, ok, maybe there's worse, but it's close) and it's ALL OVER THIS SONG.  T_T  There is NO good English translation really, it and the like of 그렇게 come from 그렇다 and basically mean "it is like that".  So they can be translated as "yes" or "right" or a hundred other things that really have ZERO FUNCTION in an English sentence and just get in the way. 
Roy sings 그래 about a million times in this song, and I have not directly translated it for most of them.

Sunday, 21 May 2017

Roy Kim - Suddenly translated lyrics

Track 3 on Blooming Season EP and the main title track.

I think I might say this every time I post a translation, but I LOOOOVE this song.  ( *_*)

It's just.. lovely.  <3  It's so Roy Kim it's PERFECT.

And because sometimes you just have to throw your key in the sea and walk off into the woods with a suitcase in order to move on.

On the days you suddenly float into my mind
Unable to catch hold of anything
Finally, the well-hidden memories of being with you
Alone, secretly, I keep drawing them out

The image of us I pictured
As it is very attractive and beautiful
I'm afraid I won't be able to forget it
Finally, I will have to erase you in them,
But according to my heart I cannot

Whether we'll be able to see each other again
I don't know, but let's all be happy
Even as we think of each other as we go through life
Let's just giggle at it
Thinking we dreamed the best dream and
Let's again tremblingly live
And let's try to think it's ok if we meet again

No, if I try thinking of it again
Even that way going on living without you
Is a difficult thing to bear
Since you are also like this
This time I will try even harder

But I still love you this way
Even though now I can't see you
But I can wait
Why can I not go to you again?
I don't know if I am just afraid

Whether we'll be able to see each other again
I don't know, but let's all be happy
Even as we think of each other as we go through life
Let's just giggle at it
Thinking we dreamed the best dream and
Let's again tremblingly live
And let's try to think it's ok if we meet again


Translator's Notes:

I realised that the official YouTube has subtitles on the MVs so I checked my translation against them when it was done so I feel like it doesn't need much explanation.  The places where it's really different are when I am being more literal (you know me and the exact words :p), that's all.
That's the wonderful (frustrating?) thing about translations, how different they can be while still saying the same thing.  ^__^

Roy Kim - Heaven translated lyrics

Yeah, ok, Heaven is track 6 so no way should I be there yet, but a) I love it <3 and b) I could tell it was going to be sooooooo easy to translate I couldn;t resist.

I'll regret later lol.

 The version on Blooming Season EP is a solo, original version is from the Goblin OST (Part 12), where he sang it with Kim E-Z from Flower Jam Project (or whatever else they translate that as, sorry idk the official English name).


I’m wasting my word
Wasting my time
I take everything and give it to you
And that moment changing everything
I was feeling it

Feeling my heart, to you
Opening up repeatedly

You wake up my heart
And walk to my world
I call you a miracle

In the midst of every breathing thing
I only remember you
While feeling and cherishing you
I want to put you near to my side
She blew me away

Heaven is in your eyes
Heaven is in your sound
To me, the world you see
Is everything
Heaven is in your kiss
Even though tears fall down
You, uniquely beneath heaven
My smile, unique beneath heaven

I'm dreaming all day
I deeply close my eyes
I call your name

The frequently breaking out smile
How is it this way?
Whoever you are, at one time
You imagined this day
You blow up my heart, my heart

Heaven is in your eyes
Heaven is in your sound
To me, the world you see
Is everything
Heaven is in your kiss
Even though tears fall down
You, uniquely beneath heaven
My smile, unique beneath heaven

As if today is the last
I will look at you,
At you, who was so good

Heaven is in your eyes
Heaven is in your sound
To me, the world you see
Is everything
Heaven is in your kiss
Even though tears fall down
You, uniquely beneath heaven
My smile, unique beneath heaven


Translator's Notes:

The "You, uniquely beneath heaven / My smile, unique beneath heaven" bit just seems very awkward in English... I can make it make more sense, but I have to go adding in verbs that aren't there?  Literally that IS what the song lyrics say, nothing else.  I think the meaning would be more clearly rendered as "You are the only one beneath heaven that makes me smile" or similar, but... that's not ACTUALLY what it says, in exact words.  I like exact words lol.

Also, if you really want to know, that smile isn't "breaking out" but more... gushing.  Like idk, a waterfall?  It's a water-shooting-out verb to my brain.  I just decided "breaking out" is more what an English smile would do?

Friday, 19 May 2017

Roy Kim - Egoist translated lyrics!

OMG I am soooooooo happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  ^________^

Roy Kim is back with a new album!!!!! 

Mini album, ok, but!  <3

I feel like I have waited FOREVER for this one.  So glad it's finally here!

Sooo in typical Kpop style it comes with Korean (and Hanja) title with a hotly debated translation... iTunes are going with Blossom, everyone else is going with Blooming Season or words to that effect.

I am going with that one, just, you know, because.  ^__^

(Actually it's because Roy Kim's official facebook announced the album title by saying, "Singer-songwriter Roy Kim will be releasing a mini album 개화기(開花期) on the 16th.  "개화기" has the meaning of the period when flowers bloom." (my translation from the Korean announcement)

THEN I looked it up in my Hanja dictionary (yup, I totes have one of those!) and the Hanja mean "opening flower period" so HA iTunes, we're right, you're wrong, there is a "season" in there too.

So~~  Apart from sticking it to iTunes, to me "Blooming Season" really does just make more sense, and although "Flowering Season" might be better English, no one else is using that one.  ^_~ 

Also, in case you wanted to know, 개화기 also has the meaning of "period of enlightenment" in Korean, as in, like the Renaissance or whatever.  Mainly Joseon dynasty turning modern, but yeah.  Maybe Roy had this in mind too?)
 
Anyway.  Got straight down to work, and here are the translated lyrics to the first track off the album.  Although it is the... second title track?  
Confusing muchly, eh.
 
You frequently expect things from me, but don't make a mistake
You're just fooling yourself
You will dream of a forever love but
It just gets hard as time goes by
Don't cross the line, this distance now is good
Don't try asking what this is between us
Just make love, just do love, yeah
Yes, look at me a little
Can you see what I want?
 Too hot, wanting to draw back my hand, that kind of love
I don't want to do it again
Because that little cold, suitably cool, that kind of love
Will be more comfortable to me
Like you are a planet, I am a star, and between us the Milky Way
If there were just that perfect gap
If it's not more, if it's not less, it'll be good
Will you understand me?
Time continually passes by, and
I simply have to go, and
You, while knowing it, why are you like that?
Instead of wanting more, instead of giving overflowingly,
Match with me a little more
 I know the bad things, egoistic is right too
But do you know it hurts me too?
 
Too hot, wanting to draw back my hand, that kind of love
I don't want to do it again
Because that little cold, suitably cool, that kind of love
Will be more comfortable to me
Like you are a planet, I am a star, and between us the Milky Way
If there were just that perfect gap
If it's not more, if it's not less, it'll be good
Will you understand me?
If I'm honest, I'm afraid
Don't hate this me
While it's like this, why do I wish for love again?
Once again, love
Too hot, wanting to draw back my hand, that kind of love
I don't want to do it again
Because that little cold, suitably cool, that kind of love
Will be more comfortable to me
Like you are a planet, I am a star, and between us the Milky Way
If there were just that perfect gap
If it's not more, if it's not less, it'll be good
Will you understand me?
 
(Translator's Notes: 
As with pretty much EVERY KOREAN SONG LYRIC EVER there is great lack of clarity about I/you/we/the old lady from across the street, whatever.  While we can safely rule out the old lady across the street I think, lines like "you will dream of a forever love" could be "we will dream" or even "I will dream".
Also I invented the word "overflowingly" because that's what the lyrics said, and yeah, I could have said "giving too much" which sounds like a thing an English speaker might say about a relationship, but... it's not quite overflowingly is it?  ^_~)